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I made this for a computer applications assessment. I wrote the lyrics, rapped and made the music with a midi keyboard, Jasmine did the singing. Check it out. Comments and Criticism please.

Lyrics:

CHORUS
Don’t you understand
I already have a plan
Im waiting
For my real life to begin

Don’t you understand

THAT i’m the newest mc
coming stright out of brunz headies
i make cuntz shout
like some poor  druggie
who just lost his stash
to the fucking piggies
all they want is more of
MY mad ryhmes
and more of these MAD times
that your bound to have
if your with me
and for a small fee
you can buy our shit on cd
pump it in the car
or at house parties
make the drunk kiddies
go wild when they listen to me
laying these words
as easy as a
nimbin kid grows a tree
or as a dog barks
its just that easy for me
to see what im going to say next
even if this shit dosent make sense
like a drunken txt
that you wish you could
have not sent or
unsend when you sober up

CHORUS
Don’t you understand
I already have a plan
Im waiting
For my real life to begin

Don’t you understand

THAT i couldent give a fuck
what cunt’s think of me
id rather be free
of all this nonsense LIKE
wanting to know who likes who
i dont care how good your street cred is
i am who i am
i know who my friends are
they are right here with me
laying these rhymes
and laughing about all
the people who do care
about all that shit

CHORUS
Don’t you understand
I already have a plan
Im waiting
For my real life to begin

Don’t you understand

i cant do english
but i know enough to write a rhyme
this is my lifetime
and i try to live my life to the fullest
this is the purest  sound that you will ever hear
so dont turn it off
just turn it up and enjoy the rap
of this 17 year old skinny kid
that like to hang with mates
- and hates his school
but dont worry its all over at the end of the year
the future is clear and coming fast
the good times will roll if your listnin to us
bustin raps at the back of the bus
waiting for every weekend to come
like a little kid waits for christmas
but when its here its
time to drink and listen to the
hip hop beats that we live our lives by

(Don’t you understand)

aussie hip hop is not a genre
its a lifestyle
of good times fun and
under the australian sun

(for we are young and free)

and if the suns is set and its dark out side
under southern cross
its time to light up a barbie
get some snags sizzling
maybe have a grizzling
as the sun dawns
all you hear is yawns
then its time for bed
hair of the dog when you wake
chicks put on their make up
it was a great NIGHT
keep going the weekends still in sight

CHORUS
Don’t you understand
I already have a plan
Im waiting
For my real life to begin

Don’t you understand